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Essay Three by Karilyn 

The definition of scientific creativity can be challenging to pinpoint. An examination of three scientists’ essays, Asimov, Kuhn, and Goodall, will help unravel what characteristics are necessary to achieve a creative idea. While Asimov and Goodall share particularly strong arguments for their beliefs, Kuhn’s arguments are weakened by his inflexible and limited definition. Goodall and Asimov understand the power of a self-education and do not limit the contribution of what one can do without being formally educated. They also indirectly reflect each other’s criteria as Goodall mirrors Asimov’s creative characteristics in her narrative. Kuhn, on the other hand, has a limited view on the education process of a scientist, which brings up questions about self-education not addressed by Kuhn. Perhaps Kuhn could further develop his definition and make it more complete and acceptable like the definitions of Asimov and Goodall.

In his article “Those Crazy Ideas,” Isaac Asimov succinctly identifies and qualifies five qualities an individual must possess to be considered creative. It is conceivable that the most important point in his essay is that education plays a significant role in the creative process. However, education is not solely responsible for all the creative minds, as Asimov outlines for his readers. As discussed thoroughly throughout the essay, the characteristics of intelligence, intuition, courage, and luck also contribute to the ingenious ideas which have shaped history. While all five characteristics presented by Asimov are important to examine when analyzing from where creativity comes, Asimov’s explanation of education, intuition, and luck strengthen and make acceptable his definition of scientific creativity.

Upon reading Asimov’s essay, one might readily agree with his interpretation of what defines scientific creativity; after all, he is an accomplished writer with an education at which no one can scoff. And no one in their right mind would argue possessing “as many ‘bits’ as possible” due to a broad education would not be advantageous when developing an innovative thought (p.148). So, perhaps the most impressive passage in the essay is when Asimov acknowledges that one does not have to be educated in the traditional sense of formal education, but can collect bits of information that accumulate in the form of self-education. He points out that, “It often happens that ‘self-educated’ is confused with ‘uneducated.’ This is an error to be avoided” (p. 146). Such a statement serves as a warning to individuals, especially those of the scholarly type, who believe only in the traditional method of education. Conversely, Asimov does point out that “The self-educated genius is therefore becoming rarer, though he has still not vanished,” which may lead some to believe he does not value the “self-educated” as he does the formally educated (p. 146). This statement does cast a shadow of doubt on the overall sincerity of Asimov’s previous statement, unless the reader examines why he says it. The bits of information that can be absorbed in self-education have indeed become “more complex over the year and the absorption of the necessary number of ‘bits’ has become more and more difficult without the guidance of someone who has already absorbed them” (p. 146). Therefore, while it is not impossible for individuals today to educate themselves, it is rather difficult to accomplish this education without assistance. So, by acknowledging that a self-educated individual can contribute in an equally effective manner as that of a traditionally educated individual, Asimov demonstrates his open-mindedness to the broad ways of becoming educated.

An individual possessing scientific creativity must certainly be intuitive. Asimov fully explains the importance of this characteristic by stating, “It is more likely that none of the group will be intuitive than that none will be intelligent or none educated” (p. 149). He establishes the powerful argument that intuition cannot be learned rather it is innate. He uses the scientists Darwin and Wallace as examples and explains their ability “…of seeing the consequences [of the cause of evolution] ‘in a flash’…” as a result of the “gift” of intuition (p. 147). It cannot be argued that intuition is a gift that everyone possesses; furthermore, it cannot be argued that intuition can be learned. In defining intuition so precisely, Asimov is effective in influencing his readers to recognize the creative person is one who possesses such a gift.

While some scientists may ignore the proposal that luck influences the outcome of every paradigm, Asimov embraces the idea. His defense of including the quality of luck as a necessity for the scientifically creative is summed up with, “…it is quite possible that a person may possess all four of the criteria [education, intelligence, intuition, courage] I have mentioned in superabundance and yet may never happen to make the necessary combination” needed to create a new idea (p. 150). Because luck is not scientifically explained, some may have difficulty accepting this characteristic’s influence in the creative process until they read Asimov’s “what if” questions regarding the luck that permitted Darwin his theory of evolution.

Asimov is effective in defining the characteristics influencing scientific creativity. He provides clear examples that the layperson can understand and agree with when examining the qualities which produce inventiveness. Such insight into the creative process from a scientist develops a sound base for acceptance of what is responsible for “Those Crazy Ideas.”

Kuhn is another scientist who attempts to identify the contributing factors of scientific creativity. In “The Route to Normal Science,” he identifies the characteristics of innovative thought by explaining the stages of paradigm development. Like Asimov, Kuhn uses the familiarity of science to explain the components that influence new ideas, in this case how paradigms are created. While some may accept Kuhn’s rationale of the creation of paradigms, others may find it difficult to agree with his beliefs because his explanation of education is limited, bringing further questions rather than resounding agreement from the reader. Furthermore, his writing style is more technical, making it more difficult for the reader to identify with the rational he presents as evidence for scientific creativity. Finally, Kuhn’s definition of the creation of paradigms lacks the personal quality which plays into the creativity of a person. Kuhn’s definition of scientific creativity is inflexible when considering education’s role in the creative process, his stylistic approach to the subject holds the reader at bay, and he fails to address the intrinsic motivations that drive the other qualities of creativity making it difficult to agree with his analysis of the creative mind.

Education is theoretically supposed to allow one to think more open-mindedly with a broad outlook on the subject at hand. Kuhn, as educated as he is, fails to see the numerous ways in which one can be educated. His statement, “The study of paradigms…is what mainly prepares the student for membership in the particular scientific community with which he will later practice” represents his restricted view about how one becomes educated (p.194). Clearly, Kuhn believes in the formal education process in order to become knowledgeable in a particular field. Then, it can be assumed by the reader that Kuhn would not consider self-education as a legitimate form of schooling. In this deduction, one would have to conclude Kuhn is very limited in his view of education, minimizing the possibility that one can be self-educated and contribute to new paradigms.

Kuhn’s educational resumè is quite impressive; however, he tends to forget his readers may lack the experience he has when writing his article. The unfamiliar content Kuhn uses to explain the evolution of paradigms hinders the reading experience. For example, Kuhn’s references to “Aristotle’s Physica, Ptolemy’s Almagest, Newton’s Principia and Opticks, Franklin’s Electricity, Lavoisier’s Chemistry, and Lyell’s Geology…” can be quite intimidating to the reader who is searching for a familiar experience to relate the information presented by the author (pp. 193-94). Moreover, the examples he uses to explain the historical development of paradigms are relatively threatening to the reader. Take for instance his illustration of physical optics, “Today’s physics textbooks tell the students that light is photons, i.e., quantum-mechanical entities that exhibit some characteristics of waves and some of particles. Research proceeds accordingly, or rather according to the more elaborate and mathematical characterization from which this usual verbalization is derived” (pp.194-95). A reader not familiar with the science of light may not readily relate to this explanation and become so caught up in the struggle to understand the illustration, he may miss Kuhn’s point on the historical development of patterns as they relate to forming a foundation in the pre-paradigm stage of paradigm development.

Furthermore, Kuhn does not account for the intrinsic motivation which proves inspirational to the scientist’s creativity. In his analysis of the paradigm development, he recognizes the historical and scientific aspects which influence the creation of new ideas, but he does not suggest any motivating factor within the scientist himself contributing to the creation of a new idea. He describes “…in the early stages of the development of any science different men confronting the same range of phenomena, but not usually all the same particular phenomena, describe and interpret them in different ways,” but he does not address what motivates the scientists to continue studying the phenomena when they all come up with different interpretations of the same idea (p. 198). What is it that provokes the Franklins and Newtons of the science community to further investigate their causes, what keeps them from giving up when others think them crazy? Kuhn should address such questions to allow for a complete understanding of paradigm development.

While Kuhn is very educated and accomplished in his field, he lacks the ability to effectively communicate the development of paradigms to the layperson. He appears close-minded as he professes membership into a specific scientific community is contingent on formal education. Additionally, the examples he uses to explain the progress of scientific creativity are ineffective and difficult for the amateur scientist to comprehend. Also contributing to the unapproachable style of Kuhn’s writing is the lack of consideration he gives to the influence of the scientist’s intrinsic power of creativity. Ignoring such an important qualities of creative science demonstrates Kuhn’s inability to relate to his readers on many levels. Jane Goodall, on the other hand, is much more effective in her communication with amateurs when relating the characteristics of creative science.

Jane Goodall’s “First Observations” essay clearly identifies the qualities necessary for scientific creativity. Goodall is a scientist with a humanistic touch who draws her readers to the subject matter she has made her life’s work. Her effective writing style is based on personal experience in Gombe, Africa where she chronicles her scientific creativity. Although all odds were against her, Goodall’s courage to contribute to her field resulted in new paradigms which support the scientific community in understanding human origins. A true scientist, Goodall collects research using her intuitive gifts to guide her decision-making process and gain the trust of her subjects. The narrative reflection of her Gombe experience, combined with the courage it took Goodall to confront a wildlife environment with no formal training and her intuition to effectively study the chimpanzees all contribute to the valuable characteristics possessed by a creative scientist.

Goodall effectively uses a narrative writing style to capture her audience’s attention and to relate her experience with the chimpanzees in a way her readers understand. She describes the setting using figurative language to aid the reader in comprehending the place she calls home, “Soon I could find my way around the sheer ravines and up and down the steep slopes of three valleys-the home valley, the Pocket, and Mlinda Valley-as well as a taxi driver finds his way about in the main streets and byways of London” (pp.179-180). Goodall also reveals the chimpanzees and their behavior with the same logical descriptions. Here she describes the chimpanzee community she observes as if she is watching humans interact, “I saw one female, newly arrived in a group, hurry up to a big male and hold her hand toward him. Almost regally he reached out, clasped her hand in his, drew it toward him, and kissed it with his lips” (p. 179). Moreover, Goodall names each of her subjects according to their behaviors or physical characteristics because she has “always been interested in the differences between individuals, and a name is not only more individual than a number but also far easier to remember” (p.181). Such an approach to science relates the logical view Goodall takes in her scientific creativity and helps the reader see the commonsensical manner in which she studies the chimpanzees.

The courage Goodall displays in presenting her findings is also present in her chronicle “First Observations.” Having no formal college education, Goodall relied on her experiences to make inferences from her observations. In fact, she was harshly criticized by professors and classmates when writing her doctorate without first possessing a bachelor’s degree. “The animals should be given numbers. Jane also used descriptive, narrative writing in her observations and calculations. She anthropomorphized her animals. Her colleagues and classmates thought she was ‘doing all wrong.’ Robert Hinde did approve her thesis, even though she returned with all of his corrections with the original names and anthropomorphizing” (Women’s Contributions…). Goodall’s courage stands out as a committed scientist when she refused to revise the names she had given the chimpanzees to numbers at the recommendation of her professor.

The intuitiveness Goodall displays throughout her writing is another characteristic necessary in depicting a scientifically creative person. She intuitively recognized the most approachable chimpanzees were David Graybeard and Goliath. Because “David Graybeard was less afraid of me from the start than were any of the other chimps,” she knew she “…had a better chance of approaching to observe them more closely” (p.182). This demonstration of intuition helped Goodall gain the trust of the chimpanzees and led to the invaluable paradigms that changed her field of science forever. Goodall’s intuition also protected her from dangerous situations she encountered in the wild. “…I saw a leopard coming toward me, his tail held up straight” (p.180). As Goodall contemplated an escape she realized running was not the answer. “So I uttered a sort of halfhearted squawk. The leopard, my logical mind told me, would be just as frightened of me if he knew I was there. Sure enough, there was a thudding of startled feet and then silence” (p.181). Again, Goodall’s intuition helps her maintain safety while pursuing her study of the chimpanzees.

It is evident in Goodall’s writing that she possesses a clear understanding of the characteristics contributing to the creative scientist. She is able to captivate her audience by relating her findings to things they are familiar with, instead of talking over their heads, as other scientific writers tend to do. Goodall’s courage and intuition are also evident and support the necessity of these characteristics in the development of creativity.

When comparing Goodall’s scientific pattern to that of Asimov’s and Kuhn’s, it is obvious that Goodall and Asimov share more of the same qualities in their definitions. Asimov identifies five qualities inherent in scientific creativity: education, intelligence, intuition, courage and luck. When examining Goodall’s methods of conducting research on the chimpanzees in Gombe, one can see she utilizes all five characteristics to gather her data.

In the first characteristic, Asimov acknowledges education can be that of traditional or innovative, and one should not discount those who have been self-educated. Goodall is a primary example of a scientist who is self-educated; and as Asimov states, “…it is an error to be avoided” to mistake self-educated as uneducated (p.146). Not having any college background prior to uprooting from Europe to Africa, Goodall did not let those who dismissed her primitive ways of conducting research influence her decision to study chimpanzees. She educated herself in the wildlife she called her home and was able to introduce new paradigms into her branch of science. Goodall also possesses intelligence, which Asimov asserts is necessary when possessing scientific creativity. His definition supports Goodall’s demonstration of intelligence, “The ability to combine ‘bits’ [information] with facility and to grow consciously aware of the new combinations is…the measure of what we call ‘intelligence’” (p.146). In other words, Goodall takes the “bits” from her observations, combines them, and uses the product to make decisions about the usefulness of the information. For example, Goodall may have never discovered that chimpanzees eat meat if she had not recognized the trust she had gained with David Graybeard, continued to build the trust, and eventually witnessed David and a few other chimps eating a piglet. Goodall also possesses Asimov’s third characteristic of creativity, intuition.

Because Goodall is able to see, as Asimov puts it, “…with little delay as possible, the consequences of the new combinations of ‘bits’ which [s]he has formed,” she is able to make breakthroughs in her field of research. She took the knowledge she possessed about chimps using objects as tools and immediately recognized this behavior exhibited by David and his companion Goliath on a termite mound. As she observed for several days, she was able to make note of the chimps using blades of grass to gain access to the termite mound. She pieced together the information and realized they were “…actually modifying an object and thus showing the crude beginnings of toolmaking” to fish the termites out from the earth (p.184). Goodall also possesses Asimov’s fourth characteristic, courage. Had Jane Goodall been intimidated by her lack of a formal education, she would not have contributed to her field, possibly putting it decades behind in discovering the meat eating, toolmaking chimpanzees. However, she was able to endure the criticism and “announce the results of your [her] creativity” to those who possessed higher degrees of education and years more experience in the field (p.149). Finally, Goodall is lucky. Asimov describes “that combinations of ‘bits’ take place quite at random…” and if luck is not present, it really does not matter if all previous four criteria are met (p.150). For instance, Goodall could have been sick the day David and his companions killed and ate the piglet, completely missing the event. Or, perhaps there would have been inclement weather the day David and Goliath were making tools to collect termites, forcing Goodall to stay in her camp and miss the episode. Goodall was lucky to be in the right place at the right time to observe such important discoveries about chimpanzees. Unlike Asimov, when comparing Kuhn to Goodall there is a huge conflict in the description Kuhn has for education, which might all but eliminate Goodall’s findings in Gombe.

Kuhn believes formal education “prepares the student” for later practice with “men who learned the bases of their field from the same concrete models,” promoting “commitment” and “an apparent consensus,” which are “prerequisites for normal science” (p.194). Although scholarly, this view of how one is educated is rather limited. Goodall was completely untrained when she entered the unknown of Gombe to study chimpanzees. Nonetheless, she proved to be competent at observing, recording and defining new paradigms for her field of science. What made Goodall so productive even though she was not aware of the “concrete models” or “consensus” of her field? She possessed determination to overcome her lack of formal education and used self-education to assist her. The characteristic of self-education is one that Kuhn has failed to recognize in his definition of scientific creativity. Kuhn not only ignores the effectiveness of self-education, he pays no attention to the determination it takes one to contribute to a paradigm without an education. Should Kuhn ever wish to revise “The Route to Normal Science,” he might examine how many contributions have been made to the sciences by those individuals who have not been “students” trained under the “concrete models” and question what other characteristic could contribute to the development of a paradigm.

While it is difficult to identify the exact composition of scientific creativity, Asimov, Kuhn and Goodall endeavor to explain the structure in their essays. Asimov and Goodall replicate similar ideas, one through scientific examples, and the other in a narrative illustration. Their approaches, although different, are acceptable to the reader because their definitions are realistic and appropriate. They each take into consideration different degrees of education and how these levels can be different, but should not be disregarded. On the contrary, Kuhn dismisses the possibility of self-education by failing to mention its potential. Such a dismissal makes it difficult for one to accept Kuhn’s definition of scientific creativity and instead embrace the characteristics defined by Asimov and embodied by Goodall.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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