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English 306: Expository Writing

Assignment Two - Revising

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Grading Form for Essay Two: (Instructor's version)

A Review of Goodall

1. The writer asserts a clear and strong judgment adequately supported by specific details from the text and from personal experience, resulting in a well-supported, compelling argument. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

2. The writer applies appropriate standards of evaluation suitable to the personal experience scholarly genre. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

3. The writer uses enough summary so that readers can understand the judgment (and not to the extent that it overshadows the judgment).0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

4. The writer, presenting a reasonable tone, addresses and refutes the counter-argument, all the while not waffling on the issue.0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

5. The writer has coherently and logically organized his/her ideas supported by apt reasons and well-chosen examples, 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 

6. The writer makes a thoughtful and in-depth evaluation. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40

7. In-class self-assessment workshop is thoughtfully completed. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

 

A Review of Kuhn

8. The writer asserts a clear and strong judgment adequately supported by specific details from the text and from personal experience, resulting in a well-supported, compelling argument. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

9. The writer applies appropriate standards of evaluation suitable to the personal experience scholarly genre. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

10. The writer uses enough summary so that readers can understand the judgment (and not to the extent that it overshadows the judgment).0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

11. The writer, presenting a reasonable tone, addresses and refutes the counter-argument, all the while not waffling on the issue.0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

12. The writer has coherently and logically organized his/her ideas supported by apt reasons and well-chosen examples, 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 

13. The writer makes a thoughtful and in-depth evaluation. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40

14. In-class self-assessment workshop is thoughtfully completed. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

 

A Review of Asimov

15. The writer asserts a clear and strong judgment adequately supported by specific details from the text and from personal experience, resulting in a well-supported, compelling argument. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

16. The writer applies appropriate standards of evaluation suitable to the personal experience scholarly genre. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

17. The writer uses enough summary so that readers can understand the judgment (and not to the extent that it overshadows the judgment).0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

18. The writer, presenting a reasonable tone, addresses and refutes the counter-argument, all the while not waffling on the issue.0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

19. The writer has coherently and logically organized his/her ideas supported by apt reasons and well-chosen examples, 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 

20. The writer makes a thoughtful and in-depth evaluation. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40

21. In-class self-assessment workshop is thoughtfully completed. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

 

Comparing Goodall to Kuhn or Asimov

22. Utilizing comparison writing techniques, the writer shows how Goodall's pattern is similar to that of Kuhn's or Asimov's?0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 

Adding to Kuhn's or Asimov's Ideas

23. Through an in-depth analysis of the three articles, the writers writes about what might be added to Kuhn's or Asimov's descriptions so that Goodall's kind of science will be more readily accepted. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 

Length, Document Design, and Stages of Writing Assignment

24. Essay meets the 7-10 page length requirement. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

25. Direct quotes, summaries, and paraphrases from the reading are smoothly integrated into the essay (Hacker 334-340). 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

26. Enclosed within a manila folder, essay includes middle draft peer review  and has been critically read by at least two readers. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 17 18 19 20

27. By linking ideas clearly, by repeating key words, by using parallel structures, by maintaining consistency, or by providing transitions, paragraphs are coherently written (Hacker 31-35). 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

28. Essay is generally free from errors in mechanics, usage, and sentence structure. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

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