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Write a  5 to 6 page essay addressing the following-

Write a review of  Goodall's, Kuhn's, and Asimov's essays, after which you should elaborate on the following: 

Jane Goodall had some difficulty being taken seriously by other scientists. To what degree does Goodall follow Kuhn’s pattern or Asimov’s pattern for scientific creativity? 
What might be added to Asimov’s or Kuhn’s descriptions to allow for Goodall’s kind of science to be more readily accepted?

To decode this assignment,  separate it into the following:

Write a review of  Goodall's, Kuhn's, and Asimov's essays.

Jane Goodall had some difficulty being taken seriously by other scientists. To what degree does Goodall follow Kuhn’s pattern or Asimov’s pattern for scientific creativity? 

What might be added to Asimov’s or Kuhn’s descriptions to allow for Goodall’s kind of science to be more readily accepted?

Now take some of the key words from the assignment and look them up in a dictionary.   Do this step even if you already know the meanings of the key words.   This may help you to focus your ideas later on.

What does "review" mean? 

What does "to what degree" mean?

What does "pattern" mean?

What does "creativity" mean?

What does "might" mean?

What does "added" mean?

What does "readily" mean?

What does "accepted" mean? 

          At first glance, writing a 5 to 6 page analysis essay may seem intimidating.   However, before you throw your book out the window and make a mad dash to Las Vegas to gamble away all your stresses, consider the following quote by Anne Dilliard:  

You know when you think about writing a book, you think it is overwhelming. But, actually, you break it down into tiny little tasks that any moron could do.   

Like writing a book, this analysis writing assignment can be broken into smaller parts. The remainder of this web page will deal with each part.

Write a  review of Jane Goodall's "First Observations"  (pp. 177-185).

Write a review of Isaac Asimov's "Those Crazy Ideas" (pp. 142-152).

Write a review of Thomas Kuhn's The Route to Normal Science (pp. 193-202).

     Since review is synonymous to "evaluate,"  you should go back to the getting started section of essay two in which you were asked to evaluate Didion's essay "On Self-Respect." Re-read characteristics of evaluative writing, which will give you an idea how to critically read and write about Jane Goodall (pp. 177-185), Isaac Asimov (pp. 142-152), and  Thomas Kuhn  (pp. 193-202). As you review each article, you should summarize no more than 1/3 of the article. You should spend  approximately 2/3 of your review analyzing the article. Four to six pages of your paper will consist of a review of the writers. To see a critique of Thomas Kuhn's "Structure of Scientific Revolutions," click here.

 

Jane Goodall had some difficulty being taken seriously by other scientists. To what degree does Goodall follow Kuhn’s pattern or Asimov’s pattern for scientific creativity? 

To explore this part of the writing assignment, spend some time writing on the following topics:

Why did Jane Goodall have difficulty being taken seriously by other scientists?  

First, you should be aware that the nature of experimental inquiry is as follows: Identifying the problem, designing the experiment, conducting the experiment in which one collects and analyzes the data, interpreting the data, and drawing conclusions after which one disseminates them to a wider audience. A scientist can be judged on the premise that one, some, or all the these steps are perceived as being flawed.

Second, a scientist can be judged in terms of credibility. A scientist's educational and professional qualifications, the respectability of the journal in which he or she has published, and reviews of the scientist's work help to determine whether or not he or she is a credible, credentialed, and esteemed authority in the field.   

Finally, the credibility of a scientist is ultimately determined by his her ability to show a thorough knowledge of the facts, to build common ground, and to respond fairly to objections and opposing arguments.

What is Kuhn's pattern for scientific creativity?

What is Asimov's pattern for scientific creativity?

Utilizing comparison writing techniques, show how Goodall's pattern is similar to that of Kuhn's or Asimov's?

What might be added to Asimov’s or Kuhn’s descriptions to allow for Goodall’s kind of science to be more readily accepted?

 Now that you have reviewed and drawn comparisons among the three writers, you need  to consider their differences, especially how Kuhn and Asimov are different from Goodall.   You should spend time writing, outlining, clustering, or brainstorming on the following topics: 

Group Asimov and Kuhn together and list some of the major similarities between these two writers.  You should consider their views on experimental inquiry and on their creation and validation of knowledge.

Consider some fundamental differences that Goodall might have from Asimov or Kuhn.   

How is Goodall's pattern for scientific creativity different from that of Kuhn or Asimov? Considering her scientific methods of inquiry by which Goodall creates  and validates knowledge, you should explain what she does differently  from Kuhn or Asimov.

How does she identify the problem about which she is researching?  In what way is this different from Kuhn's or Asimov's ideas? 

Does she design her experiments  in a way which would be acceptable to Kuhn or Asimov? 

Would Kuhn or Asimov agree with how Goodall collects and analyzes the data when she is conducting experiments?

Would Kuhn or Asimov agree with Goodall's interpretations and conclusions about her data? 

In a sense, you are being asked to modify Kuhn's or Asimov's notions of scientific inquiry that would more readily accept Goodall's methods of scientific inquiry.    Based on your notes,  should write about what might be added to Kuhn's or Asimov's descriptions so that Goodall kinds of science will be more readily acceptable.

Once you have generated 15-20 pages of  writing at this stage of your writing, you are ready to move on to the planning and drafting stage.

If you have any doubts about your topic, consider discussing your choice with me (1) by E-mail at mbuckhoff@aol.com , (2) during class at the appropriate time, or (3) at my office.   It is much less painful to refocus your topic at this stage of the writing assignment since you do yet not have a complete, highly polished draft.

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